Animals of workplace

2018-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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I think it can be applied differently depending on the type of workplace. Police stations carry trained dogs to track robbers and drug offenders. Also, the dogs often perform the mission perfectly. However, if there are unmanaged animals like hospitals with many infected people, it could do many harm.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for sharing this piece with me, Ms. [이름]!

Yes, animals can be trained and they can be a great help for people. See you in class!

~Teacher Eunice

I think it can be applied differently depending on the type of workplace.

>>> Correct!

Police stations carry trained dogs to track robbers and drug offenders.

>>> Police officers carry trained dogs to track robbers and drug offenders.

Also, the dogs often perform the mission perfectly.

>>> Also, the dogs often perform in the mission perfectly.

>>> OR: Also, the dogs often perform well in the mission.

However, if there are unmanaged animals like hospitals with many infected people, it could do many harm.

>>> However, if there are unmanaged animals in the hospitals with many infected people then it could do harm.

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