Animals that I am afraid of
학생이 쓴 원문
What animals are you afraid of?
I`m afraid of snakkes and frog.
How about you?
Snakes are very scary.
I`m scared of spider and bee.
Are there other animals that scare you?
I`m also scared of lion.
강사 첨삭
A great day to you, Jane! CHEERS for a good start! ^^
I\'m so glad that you\'ve chosen to further improve your language skills by answering your homework. I\'m pretty sure you\'re excited and eager in this beautiful journey of learning the English language. So just relax and have fun my dear, together lets discover, experience, acquire and be acquainted with knowledge and skills needed to become fluent in this global language.
To start with, we have to focus on these areas: pronunciation, vocabulary, and grammar. I encourage you to always practice expressing yourself, thoughts, ideas or insights. As much as possible be responsive, answer in complete sentences and ask questions when there\'s something unclear to you.
It\'s a pleasure to know about the animals that scare you. We have the same fears. I\'m also afraid of snakes, frogs and spiders!
Anyway, take a good rest now. See you tomorrow! :)
Teacher Carmen
What animals are you afraid of?
I`m afraid of snakkes and frog.
>> I`m afraid of snakes and frogs.
How about you?
>> Correct!
Snakes are very scary.
>> Correct!
OR>> Snakes are very frightening.
I`m scared of spider and bee.
>> I`m scared of spiders and bees.
Are there other animals that scare you?
>> Correct!
I`m also scared of lion.
>> I`m also scared of lions.
I\'m so glad that you\'ve chosen to further improve your language skills by answering your homework. I\'m pretty sure you\'re excited and eager in this beautiful journey of learning the English language. So just relax and have fun my dear, together lets discover, experience, acquire and be acquainted with knowledge and skills needed to become fluent in this global language.
To start with, we have to focus on these areas: pronunciation, vocabulary, and grammar. I encourage you to always practice expressing yourself, thoughts, ideas or insights. As much as possible be responsive, answer in complete sentences and ask questions when there\'s something unclear to you.
It\'s a pleasure to know about the animals that scare you. We have the same fears. I\'m also afraid of snakes, frogs and spiders!
Anyway, take a good rest now. See you tomorrow! :)
Teacher Carmen
What animals are you afraid of?
I`m afraid of snakkes and frog.
>> I`m afraid of snakes and frogs.
How about you?
>> Correct!
Snakes are very scary.
>> Correct!
OR>> Snakes are very frightening.
I`m scared of spider and bee.
>> I`m scared of spiders and bees.
Are there other animals that scare you?
>> Correct!
I`m also scared of lion.
>> I`m also scared of lions.
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