Anne of green gable.

2021-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

학생이 쓴 원문

I\'m going to talk about an interesting book that make be think a lot a few years ago. The book that I\'d like to talk about is called \"Anne of green gables\" written by Lucy Maud Montgomery. It is quite famous as it has been made into many animation and films. I met Anne in a television cartoon when I was child and I couldn\'t read the book. But I was very curious about Anne\'s original work, so I picked up this book from a shelf in a bookstore. I found this book enlightening. Anne is a creative and independent woman. Through Anne\'s life, I got messages that have been forgotten in our daily routines, like how to be happy and how to cherish every single moment in life. This book is full of positive messages encouraging us to bravely face issues in life, and they can guide us in the right way when we are lost. That\'s why I read this book whenever I am looking for a powerful and inspirational read.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon [이름] Hee. To be honest, I\'m amazed with knowledge of many vocabulary words. You just need to fix your sentence structure. ^_^
T. Irene
I\'m going to talk about an interesting book that make be think a lot a few years ago.
>>> I\'m going to talk about an interesting book that made me think a lot a few years ago.
The book that I\'d like to talk about is called \"Anne of green gables\", written by Lucy Maud Montgomery.
>>> Correct.
It is quite famous as it has been made into many animations and films.
>>> Correct.
OR
>>> It is quite famous as it has been adapted into many animations and films.
I met Anne in a television cartoon when I was child and I couldn\'t read the book. 
>>> I met Anne in a television cartoon when I was a child and couldn\'t read yet. 
But I was very curious about Anne\'s original work, so I picked up this book from a shelf in a bookstore.
>>> Correct. 
I found this book enlightening. Anne is a creative and independent woman. 
>>> Correct. 
Through Anne\'s life, I got messages that have been forgotten in our daily routines, like how to be happy and how to cherish every single moment in life.
>>> Through Anne\'s life, I got reminded of some important things in life, like how to be happy and how to cherish every single moment in life.
 This book is full of positive messages encouraging us to bravely face issues in life, and they can guide us in the right way when we are lost. 
>>> Correct. 
That\'s why I read this book whenever I am looking for a powerful and inspirational read.
>>> Correct. 

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