Anne of Green Gables
학생이 쓴 원문
In my childhood, there was my favorite animation named Ann of Green Gables. I liked the main character very much so I watched the cartoon series whenever they were televised. Anne is a kind of person who looks on the bright side of everythings, even though she is in a bad situation. I love the way she thinks about life. She believes that life is worth living as long as there is a laugh in it so she always imagines something interesting that makes her laugh, dreams and is true to her feelings. The most memorable word that she ever said is that " The nicest and sweetest days are not those on which anything very splendid or wonderful or exciting happens but just those that bring simple little plasure, following one another softly." Many people sometimes foget enjoying their daily life. They tend to regard happiness in everyday life as nothing and look for their happiness in the distance. However, happiness is not the sort of thing appeared suddenly. If you feel happy everyday, ultimately, your life would be full of happiness.
강사 첨삭
Good evening MISS [이름]!
Thanks for sharing something about your favorite animation when you were a kid.
That was also a meaningful quote from the character.
Let\'s talk more about it tomorrow.
Good night!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
>>> Correct!
>>> OR: When I was a child, I had a favorite animation entitled Ann of Green Cables.
I liked the main character very much so I watched the cartoon series whenever they were televised.
>>> I liked the main character very much s I watched the cartoon series whenever it was televised.
Anne is a kind of person who looks on the bright side of everythings, even though she is in a bad situation.
>>> Anne is a kind of person who looks on the bright side of everything even though she is in a bad situation.
I love the way she thinks about life.
>>> Correct!
She believes that life is worth living as long as there is a laugh in it so she always imagines something interesting that makes her laugh, dreams and is true to her feelings.
>>> She believes that life is worth living as long as you can laugh so she always imagines something interesting that makes her laugh,dream and be true to her felings.
The most memorable word that she ever said is that \" The nicest and sweetest days are not those on which anything very splendid or wonderful or exciting happens but just those that bring simple little plasure, following one another softly.\"
>>> Correct! [pleasures]
Many people sometimes foget enjoying their daily life.
>>> Correct! forget]
They tend to regard happiness in everyday life as nothing and look for their happiness in the distance.
>>> Correct! [Or: seek happiness in the distance]
However, happiness is not the sort of thing appeared suddenly.
>>> However, happiness is not the sort of thing that appears suddenly.
If you feel happy everyday, ultimately, your life would be full of happiness.
>>> Correct! [every day]
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