Anonymous
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Hi U-[이름],
You have expressed good ideas today!
Have a nice Thursday!
Teacher Elly.
Anonymous
Anonymous anounced that they will take part in the protests in the usa for the black people\'s rights.
>>Anonymous announced that they will take part in the protests in the USA for the black people\'s rights.
or>>Anonymous disclosed their intentions to join the protests in the USA for the black people\'s rights.
In korea we don\'t have such group.
>>In Korea, we don\'t have such a group.
And in my opinion, they shouldn\'t be allowed.
CORRECT!
or>>And in my view, they must not join.
When people see what they\'ve done, for example realizing the photos of KKK members, they are satisfying on this.
>>When people see what they\'ve done, for example if the photos of the KKK members will be published, then they will be satisfied with this.
But in the long term, it can be potentially harmful to society as what they do is normally breaking rules.
>>But in the long term, it can be potentially harmful to society since they normally break the law.
Anonymous is literally anonymous group.
>>Anonymous is literally an unknown group.
So they have no leaders. It means each member can lead activists.
>>So, they have no leaders. It means that each member can be a lead activist.
And those are not pure goodness so thare can be a mistake.
>>And those are not all pure and good so they can commint a mistake.
And this mistake will make innocent victims.
>>And this mistake may hurt innocent victims.
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