Another country’s food which i’ve tried

2023-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Nikki

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5 months ago, I went to Vietnam for trip. and I tried Vietnam food there. Vietnam foods was really delicious and cheap. Especially morningglory and Banh Mi was really suite for me. So i want to have that foods again.

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5 months ago, I went to Vietnam for trip. and I tried Vietnam food there. 
>> Five months ago, I went to Vietnam for a trip and I was able to try some of their food.


Vietnam foods was really delicious and cheap. 
>> The food there was really delicious and affordable. 

Especially morningglory and Banh Mi was really suite for me.
>> The Morning Glory and Banh Mi were really suitable for me.


 So i want to have that foods again.
>> So, I hope that I will be able to try their food again. 

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