Another homework of last monday ;)

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~T. IRENE~

Nowadays people tend to value what they can see such as money or beauty.

>> Correct.

OR>> Nowadays people tend to value those things they can physically see such as money or beauty.
 So they spend their strength and time to get them. 

>> Correct.

OR >> So they spend their time and effort to attain them.
 In my opinion, it caused from the development of the media. 

>> In my opinion, it was caused by the advance development in the media.
 Because the media focuses on what is visible. 

>> Correct.

OR>> Because the media focused mostly on what is visible.
 In contrast, the people in the past put their high value on things that couldn\'t see. For example, arts, thought and so on. 

>> In contrast, people in the past put high value on things that may not be physically beautiful. For example, arts, ideas and so on.
 Turning to differences between man and woman.

>> Showing the differences between men and women.

Man is usually chasing success.

>> Correct.

OR>> Man usually aims for success.

The success gives them a big confidence and satisfaction.

>> Success increases their confidence and sense of satisfaction.

Because that seems to be the way man can express themselves.

>> Because that seems to be the way men can express themselves.

So they focused on the result.

>> Correct.

>> So they concentrated on just the result.

But women tend to think that the process overweigh the result.

>> On the other hand, women tend to think that the process overweigh the result.

Because women more or less put value on emotional part.

>> Because women, more or less, put value on emotional aspects.

But it depends on the person.

>> Correct.

>> But I believe that it will still depend on the person.