Another life
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If I have another life, I want to be an engineer; either architecture or computer software.
I was interested in programming when I was young, it was logical and making a software run itself was very interesting. About the architecture, I was amazed by big buildings, bridges and highways;they are so fascinating that sometimes I think building those things would be fun and proud.
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I think, no matter what you chose to be, you would\'ve been as good as you are now. :)
If I have another life, I want to be an engineer; either architecture or computer software.
>> If I have another life, I want to be an engineer; either major in Architecture or Computer Software.
I was interested in programming when I was young, it was logical and making a software run itself was very interesting.
>>I was interested in programming when I was young. It was logical, and making a software run itself was very interesting.
About the architecture, I was amazed by big buildings, bridges and highways;they are so fascinating that sometimes I think building those things would be fun and proud.
>> About Architecture, I was amazed by big buildings, bridges and highways; they are so fascinating that sometimes I think building those things would be fun and will make me feel proud.
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