Answer 10.

2015-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Hi! Good afternoon! I'm Nayeong Shim. I'd like to a dinner reservation in your restaurant on Tuesday. I'll have a dinner with my family, so could you prepare four people table of terrace at 6:30 pm? I love your restaurant's atmosphere and I'm a regular customer. Therefore, all menu is familiar and I'll order b course, however, could you recommend other couse or dishes for my family? And do you have any discount or promotion? I really expect your call about exact reservation conform. Thanks.

강사 첨삭

Wow restaurants always leave me salivating :)

Not to mention this is a good practice for when you reserve at a restaurant *_*

Hi! Good afternoon! I\'m Nayeong Shim.
>>Hi! Good afternoon! I\'m Na Yeong Shim.
I\'d like to a dinner reservation in your restaurant on Tuesday.
>>I\'d like to a make dinner reservation in your restaurant on Tuesday.
I\'ll have a dinner with my family, so could you prepare four people table of terrace at 6:30 pm?
>>I\'ll have dinner with my family, so could you prepare table for four at the terrace at 6:30 pm?
I love your restaurant\'s atmosphere and I\'m a regular customer.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, all menu is familiar and I\'ll order b course, however, could you recommend other couse or dishes for my family?
>>Since I am familiar with the menu, could you recommend a different one for my family?
And do you have any discount or promotion? 
>>CORRECT!
I really expect your call about exact reservation conform. Thanks.

>>I am really expecting your call regarding the confirmation. Thanks.

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