Answer 11.

2015-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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I'm so pleased to hear that you enjoy listening to music. So do I. I prefer pop to other genre music. How about you? What kind of music do you prefer? Who's your favorite singer? I always listen to music by using my smartphone. How do you normally listen to music, an MP3 player or a smart phone? How does music affect you? Which song do you listen the most?

강사 첨삭

Music greatly influences a certain atmosphere *_*

It creates an undeniably impressive mood which can transform us!

Have a great day, [이름]!

I\'m so pleased to hear that you enjoy listening to music. So do I.
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I prefer pop to other genre music.

>>I prefer pop music to other genre.
How about you?
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What kind of music do you prefer?
>>CORRECT!
Who\'s your favorite singer?
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I always listen to music by using my smartphone.
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How do you normally listen to music, an MP3 player or a smart phone?
>>How do you normally listen to music, through an MP3 player or a smartphone?
How does music affect you?
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Which song do you listen the most?

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