Answer 12.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Hello! My name is [Name] Shim and I\'m a senior majoring in business administration.
>>Hello! My name is [Name] Yeong Shim and I\'m a senior majoring in Business Administration.
Could I know what are the required subjects this semester?
>>CORRECT!
To be honest, I\'ll go abroad to Europe for traveling next week, so I can not register for courses during registration period.
>>To be honest, I\'ll travel abroad next week, so I can not enroll during the registration period.
I have to graduate this semester and take every required courses for it.
>>CORRECT!
In this situation, how can I register later?
>>CORRECT!
Should I visit professor of every courses and get the permission?
>>Should I visit the professor of every course and get the permission?
Is there any another registration period later?
>>Is there any another registration period?
I visited the university website to know about the registration, however I didn\'t able to find it, so I call you.
>>I visited the university website to know about the registration, however I wasn\'t able to find it, so I called you.
Thanks for the assistance. Have a great day.
>>CORRECT!
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