Answer 13.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
What an awesome experience it is!
When we travel with a friend, of course^^
Anyways, I highly appreciate your being polite when you turned down your friend\'s invitation *_*
Hi, brian!
>>Hi, Brian!
It\'s me, [이름], Thanks for your suggestion for traveling with me.
>>It\'s me, [이름].
>>Thanks for your suggestion to travel with me.
You want to travel one day seould tour, right?
>> You want to travel in Seoul for one day, right?
However, my parents and I alreadt made a scheduled trip going to Pajoo city where my younger brother works as an army.
>>However, my parents and I already made a scheduled trip to Paju City where my younger brother serves the military.
I\'m really sorry about that I didn\'t mention when you told me about the trip.
>>I\'m really sorry that I didn\'t mention about it when you told me about the trip.
At that time, I confused the date and I realized my mistake later.
>>At that time, I was confused on the date and I realized my mistake later.
My younger brother set up the visit date and I canoont change it.
>>My younger brother set up the visit date and I can not change it anymore.
I hope we can plan another trip when I get back?
>>CORRECT!
How about going to Jeonju city by train end the of the month?
>>How about going to Jeonju City by train at the end the of the month?
I\'ll be in charge of every scheduling and reservation.
>>I\'ll be in charge of every schedule and reservation.
Just leave it all to me!
>>CORRECT!
Please let me knos your opinion.
>> Please let me know your opinion.
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