Answer 13.

2015-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Hi, brian! It's me, [이름], Thanks for your suggestion for traveling with me. You want to travel one day seould tour, right? However, my parents and I alreadt made a scheduled trip going to Pajoo city where my younger brother works as an army. I'm really sorry about that I didn't mention when you told me about the trip. At that time, I confused the date and I realized my mistake later. My younger brother set up the visit date and I canoont change it. I hope we can plan another trip when I get back? How about going to Jeonju city by train end the of the month? I'll be in charge of every scheduling and reservation. Just leave it all to me! Please let me knos your opinion.

강사 첨삭

What an awesome experience it is!

When we travel with a friend, of course^^

Anyways, I highly appreciate your being polite when you turned down your friend\'s invitation *_*

Hi, brian!

>>Hi, Brian!

 It\'s me, [이름], Thanks for your suggestion for traveling with me.

>>It\'s me, [이름].

>>Thanks for your suggestion to travel with me.
 You want to travel one day seould tour, right?

>> You want to travel in Seoul for one day, right?
However, my parents and I alreadt made a scheduled trip going to Pajoo city where my younger brother works as an army.
>>However, my parents and I already made a scheduled trip to Paju City where my younger brother serves the military.
I\'m really sorry about that I didn\'t mention when you told me about the trip.
>>I\'m really sorry that I didn\'t mention about it when you told me about the trip.
At that time, I confused the date and I realized my mistake later.
>>At that time, I was confused on the date and I realized my mistake later.
My younger brother set up the visit date and I canoont change it.
>>My younger brother set up the visit date and I can not change it anymore.
I hope we can plan another trip when I get back?
>>CORRECT!
How about going to Jeonju city by train end the of the month?
>>How about going to Jeonju City by train at the end the of the month?
I\'ll be in charge of every scheduling and reservation.
>>I\'ll be in charge of every schedule and reservation. 
Just leave it all to me!

>>CORRECT!

Please let me knos your opinion.

>> Please let me know your opinion.

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