Answer 3.

2015-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

There are so many different food that I like and also, I love all kinds of food. Especially, I love to eat Korean style spicy hot pot. It's delicious food cooked with shrimp, squid, clam, cat fish and so on. Those ingridients are boiled together in the hot pot with spicy soup. It's very good with Korean vodka, Soju. I can relieve my stress by eating hot and spicy food. While I eat this food, I always sweat profusely and drink a lof of water. It makes me refresh.

강사 첨삭

Ah! Why are you writing about food TT

I am very hungry! It is very early in the morning and I am already starving!

Anyways, let us talk about more of this later!^^

There are so many different food that I like and also, I love all kinds of food.

>>There are so many different kinds of food that I like and also, I love all kinds of it.
Especially, I love to eat Korean style spicy hot pot.

>>CORRECT!
 It\'s delicious food cooked with shrimp, squid, clam, cat fish and so on.

>>It\'s delicious food cooked with shrimp, squid, clam, catfish and so on.
Those ingridients are boiled together in the hot pot with spicy soup.

>>Those ingredients are boiled together in a hot pot with spicy soup.
It\'s very good with Korean vodka, Soju.

>>CORRECT!

I can relieve my stress by eating hot and spicy food.

>>CORRECT!
While I eat this food, I always sweat profusely and drink a lof of water.

>>While eating this food, I always sweat profusely and drink a lot of water.

It makes me refresh.

>>It refreshes me.


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