Answer 3.
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Ah! Why are you writing about food TT
I am very hungry! It is very early in the morning and I am already starving!
Anyways, let us talk about more of this later!^^
There are so many different food that I like and also, I love all kinds of food.
>>There are so many different kinds of food that I like and also, I love all kinds of it.
Especially, I love to eat Korean style spicy hot pot.
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It\'s delicious food cooked with shrimp, squid, clam, cat fish and so on.
>>It\'s delicious food cooked with shrimp, squid, clam, catfish and so on.
Those ingridients are boiled together in the hot pot with spicy soup.
>>Those ingredients are boiled together in a hot pot with spicy soup.
It\'s very good with Korean vodka, Soju.
>>CORRECT!
I can relieve my stress by eating hot and spicy food.
>>CORRECT!
While I eat this food, I always sweat profusely and drink a lof of water.
>>While eating this food, I always sweat profusely and drink a lot of water.
It makes me refresh.
>>It refreshes me.
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