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2013-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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Tell us about one of your weaknesses Sometimes I try and do too much at one time. when I was in university I prepared several exams but I wanted to learn quilt and play tennis. at that time I didn't think about my schedules I was totally exhausted I realized I have to organize my schedules depend on priority. How would you react if a customer returned a cup of coffee to you, saying that they didn't like it? first of all I apology to customer and then I will ask why this coffee is not good. when customer talk about the problem I catch customers taste I will make a new coffee which is suitable the customer. Tell me about a time when you had to provide excellent customer service recently? last year I prepared a big event for my students and their parents. I worked overtime to prepare the event. during event I also had counseling time with children and their parents. it was a great idea to know each other teacher, student and parents.

강사 첨삭

Good morning!

Thank you for sending your homework.

Yeah, I think you really do many things all at once.

You gave in three home works today.^^

Good job!

See you tomorrow.

T. Ritchel^^

 Tell us about one of your weaknesses.

>> Correct
Sometimes I try and do too much at one time.

>> Sometimes I do many thing at one time.

when I was in university I prepared several exams but I wanted to learn quilt and play tennis.

>> When I was a university student, I usually prepare several exams but I also wanted to learn quilting and tennis.

at that time I didn\'t think about my schedules I was totally exhausted I realized I have to organize my schedules depend on priority.

>> At that time, I didn\'t think about my schedules that\'s why I was totally exhausted then I realized, I have to organize my schedule depending on my priorities.
How would you react if a customer returned a cup of coffee to you, saying that they didn\'t like it?

>> Correct
first of all I apology to customer and then I will ask why this coffee is not good.

>> First, I will apologize to the customer and I will ask why this coffee is not good.

 when customer talk about the problem I catch customers taste I will make a new coffee which is suitable the customer.

>> If the customer doesn\'t like the taste, I will make another cup which suits the customer\'s request.
Tell me about a time when you had to provide excellent customer service recently?

>> Correct
last year I prepared a big event for my students and their parents.

>> Last year, I prepared a big event for my students and their parents.

I worked overtime to prepare the event.

>> Correct

 during event I also had counseling time with children and their parents.

>>During the event, I also had a time for counseling with the children and their parents.

 it was a great idea to know each other teacher, student and parents.

>> It was a great idea to know the other teachers, students and their parents.

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