Answer 4.
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I love talking about free time^^
Just conversing about it relaxes me *_*
Thanks for this [이름]!
I am looking forward to hear your voice, honey!
I really loke to surf the internet or watch vidos during my free time.
>>I really love to surf the Internet or watch videos during my free time.
Nowdays, I spend my time to watch The Simpsons.
>> Nowadays, I spend my time watching The Simpsons.
You know,the simpson is the most famous television animation serize ever and it has bordcasted since 1989.
>>You know, The Simpsons is the most famous television animation series ever and it has been broadcasted since 1989.
The 26th season is on air at American Fox channel.
>>The 26th season is on air in American Fox channel.
I want to learn about convensational English and it\'s very helpful for me.
>>I want to learn about conversational English and it\'s very helpful for me.
Also, during vacation, I learn Yoga and pilates from video.
>> Also, during vacation, I learn yoga and Pilates by video.
It makes my blod line refine softly and stretch.
>> It makes my vein refined and flexible.
The weather is too cold to exercise outside.
>>CORRECT!
So, I practice yoga at my home.
>> So, I practice yoga at home.
Finally, I\'m always searching for my hobbies to spend my time efficiently.
>> Finally, I always search for my hobbies to spend my time efficiently.
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