Answer 5.

2015-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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First of all, I will prepare a guide book about the countries. I'm the well-prepared and the book always gives me detailed information for travel. Second, it's very essentional thing to bring a passport because that will be checked upon my entry and exit to my country. Whenever I go anywhere, it must be with me. Finally, international credit card like visa or master is necessary. I cary a very little cash when I travel because it may be a target of bad crime. Card will be more safer than cash if I don't mind to spend much money.

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First of all, I will prepare a guide book about the countries.

>>CORRECT!
I\'m the well-prepared and the book always gives me detailed information for travel.

>> I\'m the well-prepared and the book always gives me detailed information for the travel.
Second, it\'s very essentional thing to bring a passport because that will be checked upon my entry and exit to my country.

>>Second, it\'s very essential to bring a passport because that will be checked upon my entry and exit to my country.
Whenever I go anywhere, it must be with me.

>>CORRECT!

Finally, international credit card like visa or master is necessary.

>> Finally, an international credit card like Visa or Master is necessary.

I cary a very little cash when I travel because it may be a target of bad crime.

>> I carry a little amount of cash when I travel because it may be a target of bad crime.

Card will be more safer than cash if I don\'t mind to spend much money.

>>Toting along a card will be safer than cash if I don\'t mind spending much money.

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