Answer 6.

2015-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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The house work that I really enjoy doing is cleaning. Actually, I don't do housework much because I live with parents and my mother usually does homework everyday. When I stay at home, I clean room my self. For example, I tide my desk, make bed, throw away garbage, swwp and mop the flook and so on. If my mom goes out, I sometimes do the laundey or wash the dishes. I don't like do house chores, so I'm a little bit worry about doing house work after marriage. I'll equaly spilt chores with my future husband.

강사 첨삭

Who enjoys doing housework, anyways?

Ha! Ha! It is one of the most daunting tasks on earth ;(

Anyways, thanks for your effort in making this paragraph^^

See you later, [이름]!

The house work that I really enjoy doing is cleaning.

>>CORRECT!
Actually, I don\'t do housework much because I live with parents and my mother usually does homework everyday.
>>Actually, I don\'t do housework much because I live with parents and my mother usually does that everyday.
When I stay at home, I clean room my self.
>>When I stay at home, I clean my room by myself.
For example, I tide my desk, make bed, throw away garbage, swwp and mop the flook and so on.
>>For example, I tidy my desk, make my bed, throw away the garbage, sweep and mop the floor and so on. 
If my mom goes out, I sometimes do the laundey or wash the dishes.
>>If my mom goes out, I sometimes do the laundry or wash the dishes. 
I don\'t like do house chores, so I\'m a little bit worry about doing house work after marriage.
>>I don\'t like doing the house chores, so I\'m a little bit worried about doing it after marriage.
I\'ll equaly spilt chores with my future husband.

>>I\'ll equally spilt chores with my future husband.

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