Answer 6.
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Who enjoys doing housework, anyways?
Ha! Ha! It is one of the most daunting tasks on earth ;(
Anyways, thanks for your effort in making this paragraph^^
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The house work that I really enjoy doing is cleaning.
>>CORRECT!
Actually, I don\'t do housework much because I live with parents and my mother usually does homework everyday.
>>Actually, I don\'t do housework much because I live with parents and my mother usually does that everyday.
When I stay at home, I clean room my self.
>>When I stay at home, I clean my room by myself.
For example, I tide my desk, make bed, throw away garbage, swwp and mop the flook and so on.
>>For example, I tidy my desk, make my bed, throw away the garbage, sweep and mop the floor and so on.
If my mom goes out, I sometimes do the laundey or wash the dishes.
>>If my mom goes out, I sometimes do the laundry or wash the dishes.
I don\'t like do house chores, so I\'m a little bit worry about doing house work after marriage.
>>I don\'t like doing the house chores, so I\'m a little bit worried about doing it after marriage.
I\'ll equaly spilt chores with my future husband.
>>I\'ll equally spilt chores with my future husband.
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