Answer 7.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Whew! Keep yourself warm always, [이름]^^
The cold weather makes us susceptible to common cold and cough TT
Take care and see you!
Today\'s weather is sunny and a strong wind, so it\'s chilly today.
>>Today\'s weather is sunny and windy, so it\'s chilly today.
Temperature falls down below zero and the air is dry.
>>Temperature falls below zero and the air is dry.
Everyone I see on the street are wearing a scarf, gloves, thick coats and paddings.
>>Everyone I see on the street is wearing a scarf, a pair of gloves, thick coats and paddings.
Today, I also wear thick padding with ugg boots.
>>Today, I am also wearing a thick padding jacket with Ugg boots.
During winter, I always wear a comforter muffler because I easily have a sore throat and don\'t wanna to be sick.
>>During the winter, I always wear a comfortable muffler because I easily have a sore throat and don\'t want to be sick.
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