Answer 8.
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite season is fall.
I love watching many kinds of falling leaves and high sky with light cloudy.
A lively breeze blowes everywhere with dried trees' smell and the temperature remains steady.
I can wear soft knit and flower skirt with brown boots and go on a picnic to feel autumn head and ear.
강사 첨삭
How I wish to experience the fall season!
Unfortunately, we only have two seasons here in the Philippines *_*
My favorite season is fall.>>CORRECT!
I love watching many kinds of falling leaves and high sky with light cloudy.
>>I love watching many kinds of falling leaves and the slightly cloudy sky.
A lively breeze blowes everywhere with dried trees\' smell and the temperature remains steady.
>>A lively breeze blows everywhere with dried trees\' smell and the temperature remains steady.
I can wear soft knit and flower skirt with brown boots and go on a picnic to feel autumn head and ear.
>>I can wear soft knit and flower skirt with brown boots and go on a picnic to feel the autumn.
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