Answer 9.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Traveling has always been in my to-do list every year!
It broadens our horizons, and reforms our perspectives!
I am hoping to travel around Korea and be with you one of these days, [이름]~
I have never been to Europe.
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So, the next time that I travel and if I have a lot of money, I would like to travel aroung Euro countries with my mom who never went to go abroad.
>>So, the next time when I travel and if I have a lot of money, I would like to travel around European countries with my mom who has never gone abroad.
I especially like to visit Paris and Rome.
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Those cities have a long history and mix with both traditional and modern culture.
>>Those cities have a long history and mix of both traditional and modern culture.
Whenever my mom and I watch beautiful scene of those cities on television, we always wish to travel there.
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Also, my mom expects me to use English with foreigners as she couldn\'t have a culture have a chance seeing which I speak in English.
>>Also, my mom expects me to use English with foreigners as she couldn\'t have a chance seeing me speak in English.
It makes her delighted and she will be very proud of me.
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Therefore, I hope to travel abroad with mother.
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