Answer about my free time
학생이 쓴 원문
when I have some free time, I often go to coffee shop and I always order a matcha latte and a piece of cake with my friend or my sis . But you know, when I want to rest, I don’t go outside, and cooking lunch in my sweet home actually I like to making something. So I trying to make another countries food for example sushi, Indian curry~
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! It sounds like you have a nice balance between going out and staying in. Visiting a coffee shop with friends or your sister is a great way to relax, while cooking international dishes at home shows creativity and curiosity. Exploring different cuisines like sushi or Indian curry is a fun and rewarding way to expand your skills.
-T. Sonny
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when I have some free time, I often go to coffee shop and I always order a matcha latte and a piece of cake with my friend or my sis .
>>When I have free time, I often go to a coffee shop and order a matcha latte with a piece of cake, usually with my friend or sister.
But you know, when I want to rest, I don’t go outside, and cooking lunch in my sweet home actually I like to making something.
>>But, you know, when I want to relax at home, I enjoy cooking lunch, as I actually like making things.
So I trying to make another countries food for example sushi, Indian curry~
>>I also like trying dishes from other countries, such as sushi or Indian curry.
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