Answer about what is your favorite memory of 2022?
학생이 쓴 원문
My marry anniversary is in 16th October. So we have gone to travel at PYEON CHANG. In the PYEON CHANG\' beautiful and warmful house, we have filled up our physical and mental energy. I want to go to winter travel, again. and It is interested that i have been studying to speak english. i hope to naturally speak with anyone by english. thank you my teacher.
강사 첨삭
Congratulations once again to you and your wife\'s recent wedding, Steven! ^_^ I\'m glad it became a memorable part of your 2022. Based on your composition, it seems like Pyeon Chang is a beautiful place to go to someday as a tourist! :) And you\'re very much welcome, Steven. You are a good student. ^^
~T.Harmony <3
>> My wedding anniversary is on the 16th of October.
So we have gone to travel at PYEON CHANG.
>> We traveled to Pyeon Chang.
In the PYEON CHANG\' beautiful and warmful house, we have filled up our physical and mental energy.
>> In Pyeon Chang, there was a beautiful house that kept us warm. Because of that, we were able to refill our physical and mental energy.
I want to go to winter travel, again.
>> I want to travel during winter time again.
and It is interested that i have been studying to speak english.
>> I have been interested in English, so I have been studying to improve my English skills.
i hope to naturally speak with anyone by english.
>> I hope to be able to naturally speak with anyone using English.
thank you my teacher.
>> CORRECT! :)
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