Answer : Are people from the \"older\" generation always more wise and correct in their ways of thin
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t know exactly about this question. first, I think that In human\'s life experience is very important asset and become big power what to do. but sometimes there is too proud people in older people. because he believes his experience too much. What i want to say is that the people is always humble. that is very important. your question is good. because i think deeply this question.
강사 첨삭
Good answer, Steven! ^_^ Age is not really everything, and we cannot compare the generation before to the generation today because so much has already changed. Plus, I also agree that we should all be humble regardless of who we are. :)
~T.Harmony <3
>> I\'m not entirely sure how to answer this question.
first, I think that In human\'s life experience is very important asset and become big power what to do.
>> First, I think that a human\'s life experience is a valuable asset in having the power to do things.
but sometimes there is too proud people in older people.
>> But sometimes, there can be older people who are too proud of themselves.
because he believes his experience too much.
>> Because he believes in his experiences way too much.
OR>> Because he thinks too highly of his experiences.
What i want to say is that the people is always humble.
>> My point is, people should always be humble.
that is very important.
>> CORRECT!
(Just capitalize \"t\" since it is the beginning of your sentence, which will make it \"That is very important\" ^^)
your question is good.
>> CORRECT!
(\"Your\")
because i think deeply this question.
>> Because the question made me think deeply.
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