Answer : Choose one member from your family and describe him/her to me.
학생이 쓴 원문
I choose my mother. My mother is leader of my family.
The faith of my family was started by my mother.
When i was student, we were very poor. but my mother didn\\\'t give up and brang up until my sister\\\'s wedding and last my wedding.
Finally, my mother saw my sister\\\'s baby at April, and will see my baby at December in this year.
My mother had experienced hard life, now she is living with grateful days.
then, how about your family?
I will not have class today ㅠ.ㅠ... and 31th May, too.
please to refer !
강사 첨삭
Awwwww this was a genuinely touching answer, Steven. It\'s so sweet. ㅠㅠ I can feel the love in your family. <3 As for my family, I will also choose my mother because you reminded me of mine. She is also a hard worker, and has sacrificed a lot for my family. I think mothers are the best! And it\'s okay if you cannot attend your classes today and on May 31, Steven! I understand. ^^
~T.Harmony <3
>> CORRECT!
My mother is leader of my family.
>> My mother is the leader of my family.
The faith of my family was started by my mother.
The faith of my family was started by my mother.
>> CORRECT!
When i was student, we were very poor.
When i was student, we were very poor.
>> When I was a student,...
but my mother didn\\\'t give up and brang up until my sister\\\'s wedding and last my wedding.
>> But my mother never gave up and brought us up until the weddings of my sister and I.
Finally, my mother saw my sister\\\'s baby at April, and will see my baby at December in this year.
Finally, my mother saw my sister\\\'s baby at April, and will see my baby at December in this year.
>> CORRECT!
My mother had experienced hard life, now she is living with grateful days.
My mother had experienced hard life, now she is living with grateful days.
>> CORRECT!
then, how about your family?
then, how about your family?
>> CORRECT!
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