Answer : Do you wish you worked in a different company? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
No, I don\'t wanna change my company.
In fact, I just want to take the rest for a long time.
I already worked in three companies for about 8 years.
So, I respect so many fathers who worked for above minimum 20 years in this country.
how about you? Are you happy to work? If that is right, you are blessed person!
what do you really want to do in your life?
강사 첨삭
That\'s a great mindset to have, Steven! You have great respect for the people around you, and I applaud you for that. ^^ As for me, yes, I am happy to be an educator and a teacher to my students. I am someone who finds happiness in sharing my blessings to others, and helping people to reach their full potential. Thank you for your answer, and thanks for asking!
~T.Harmony <3
>> CORRECT!
In fact, I just want to take the rest for a long time.
In fact, I just want to take the rest for a long time.
>> ...I just want to take a rest...
I already worked in three companies for about 8 years.
I already worked in three companies for about 8 years.
>> CORRECT!
So, I respect so many fathers who worked for above minimum 20 years in this country.
So, I respect so many fathers who worked for above minimum 20 years in this country.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> I respect a lot of seniors...
how about you?
how about you?
>> CORRECT!
Are you happy to work?
>> Are you happy with your work?
If that is right, you are blessed person!
>> CORRECT!
what do you really want to do in your life?
what do you really want to do in your life?
>> CORRECT!
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