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2018-01-26 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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Page 14 Q6 I think that there are some measures to solve the problem of food shortage. The first step for everyone to be able to easily take part in together is to reduce food waste. The second is that we develop a new technology to improve the rate of agricultural production. The final is that every country should help each other who are suffering from food shortage. By everyone and every country in the world doing like above, we can solve the problem of food shortage. Page 15 Q1 I like a history book most. Other books that I like are a scientific book and a novel. Because it is fun and beneficial to my knowledge. I could especially get a living lesson and useful indirect experience from historic people and event. Q2 I have been reading history books called “The story of the world” since some months. they consist of 4 books and deal with the history of the world from prehistoric times to modern times. Q3 In fact, they are written for elementary school students, but in that time I made up my mind to read these books for studying and fun. My goal is to improve my English speaking to almost the same level of these books. I am reading now in the middle of the 3rd book.

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Page 14
 Q6
 I think that there are some measures to solve the problem of food shortage. The first step for everyone to be able to easily take part in together is to reduce food waste. The second is that we develop a new technology to improve the rate of agricultural production. The final is that every country should help each other who are suffering from food shortage. By everyone and every country in the world doing like above, we can solve the problem of food shortage.


>>> I think that there are some measures to solve the problem of food shortage. (There are measures that can be done to solve food shortage). The first step for everyone to easily take part in solving this problem is to reduce food waste.The second step is for us to develop a new technology to improve the rate of agricultural production. (The second step is for us to develop a new technology to increase food production.) The final step is for every country to help each other to solve the problem of food shortage. By following or doing these steps, we can solve the problem of food shortage.


 Page 15
 Q1
 I like a history book most. Other books that I like are a scientific book and a novel. Because it is fun and beneficial to my knowledge. I could especially get a living lesson and useful indirect experience from historic people and event.

>>> I like history books the most. Other books that I like are scientific books and novels because they\'re fun to read and it\'s a good way to increase my knowledge. I could especially get lessons from real-life stories. I also read about many historical figures and historic events which are truly inspirational and motivating. 

 Q2
 I have been reading history books called “The story of the world” since some months. they consist of 4 books and deal with the history of the world from prehistoric times to modern times.

>>> I have been reading a history book called, “The story of the world” for a few months now. It is a series that is  consisted of 4 books and it covers the history of the world from the prehistoric times to modern times.


 Q3
 In fact, they are written for elementary school students, but in that time I made up my mind to read these books for studying and fun. My goal is to improve my English speaking to almost the same level of these books. I am reading now in the middle of the 3rd book.
>>> In fact, they are written for elementary school students, but I decided to read them to gain more knowledge and to have some fun. My goal is to improve my English skills to almost the same level as these books. I am already halfway finished on the 3rd book. 

 

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