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2018-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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Page 17 Q1 I like music a lot. Whenever I listen to music, I feel relaxing and healing from stress. Q2 I like classical music the most, and I also like k-pop, pop song, and jazz music. I am trying to listen to music in a home as long as I have time. For example, I always turn on audio in order to listen to music with background music during cleaning up my house, having a meal, and taking a rest. so that is the reason why I like classical music because classical music is suitable for background music. Q3 Music plays can give a rest and the peace of mind to the people. It allows us to refresh our mind and to restore our strength. I think that it is a better way to take a short rest by listening music than any other methods when we are mentally tired. Q4 I usually listen to music in the home and try not to do outside. because I want listening to music to be only used in maximizing refreshment from daily fatigue. If I listen to music when I am outside or working, then I couldn’t concentrate on my task. it affects the efficiency of my work negatively. It is the happiest time to me when I listen to music in the home. When I come home from work, I change my home clothes, wash up face and hand, have dinner, and then it is the time for music.

강사 첨삭

A lovely Thursday afternoon to you, [이름]ki!

Thanks for uploading your answers in advance. I appreciate it.

I made several revisions, but your answers are definitely appropriate to the questions.

Don\'t worry, like we also do, we\'re going to go over the changes that I made during our class.

Cheers,

Amanda ^-^


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Q1
I like music a lot. Whenever I listen to music, I feel relaxing and healing from stress.

>> I like music a lot. Whenever I listen to music, I feel relaxed and healed from stress.

>> OR: I like listening to music a lot because it relieves my stress, so it makes me feel relaxed.

 Q2
I like classical music the most, and I also like k-pop, pop song, and jazz music. I am trying to listen to music in a home as long as I have time. For example, I always turn on audio in order to listen to music with background music during cleaning up my house, having a meal, and taking a rest. so that is the reason why I like classical music because classical music is suitable for background music.

>> I like K-pop, pop song, and jazz music, but I like classical music the most. I try to listen to music at home whenever I have time. For example, while I\'m cleaning my house, having a meal or taking a rest, I always play some music. The reason why I like classical music is because its\' a suitable background music.



 Q3
Music plays can give a rest and the peace of mind to the people. It allows us to refresh our mind and to restore our strength. I think that it is a better way to take a short rest by listening music than any other methods when we are mentally tired.

>> Music gives people peace of mind. It allows us to refresh our mind and restore our strength. I think that listening to music is a better way to take a short rest than (OR: as compared with) any other methods when we are mentally tired.

 Q4
I usually listen to music in the home and try not to do outside. because I want listening to music to be only used in maximizing refreshment from daily fatigue. If I listen to music when I am outside or working, then I couldn’t concentrate on my task. it affects the efficiency of my work negatively. It is the happiest time to me when I listen to music in the home. When I come home from work, I change my home clothes, wash up face and hand, have dinner, and then it is the time for music.

>> I usually listen to music at home because I want to maximize it\'s soothing and relaxing effect to get rid of fatigue. If I listen to music when (OR: while) I am outside or working, then I couldn’t concentrate on my task. It affects the efficiency of my work negatively. Listening to music at home is one of my happiest moments. When I come home from work, I change to my \"home clothes\", wash up my face and hand, have dinner, and then I listen to music.  

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