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2018-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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Page18 Q5. I think that it is a good trial to learn something. because we can develop ourself through learning activity and feel a sense of accomplishment when we finish it. Moreover, It allows us to enjoy a pleasant time with family, friends, and others. It also gives us a feeling of satisfaction in our mind and embraces us warmly to feel comfortable. And to conclude, playing musical instruments is good for us in all aspects. Q6. I think that it is good for us to experience other country’s cultures like western music as much as possible. because we can taste new and different feeling which we can never get from Korean culture and music. It also may stimulate Korean music to be developed in another new way. As we experience various cultures, we can create another interesting culture in music. That is the reason why I like other counter music including Western music. It is good for us as well as all over the world. Page19 Q1. I like talking with others to exchange our experience and idea, and I like reading books and listening to music. Q2. I have been reading books since childhood and I have been listening to music since middle school, but I can listen to music with Hi-Fi audio system recently, because of working in my company. Q3. In fact, I can't read my favorite books recently except for textbook for studying. I am studying now for getting the certificate of level 1 in Korean history exam. and I have been reading English history books to improve my English skills and studying textbook for Power English lesson for 10 months. It also affects me listening to music less. Q4 Yes, I do. I think that there are many kinds of a hobby because there is no one who has the same personality in the world. So I can understand various hobbies, and I want to experience all of them but not keeping a pet. because I like animals but not wanting them to live with at home. I have an allergy to animal fur and my wife scare from animals.

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Q5. What are the benefits of learning to play musical instruments?
I think that it is a good trial to learn something. because we can develop ourself through learning activity and feel a sense of accomplishment when we finish it. Moreover, It allows us to enjoy a pleasant time with family, friends, and others. It also gives us a feeling of satisfaction in our mind and embraces us warmly to feel comfortable. And to conclude, playing musical instruments is good for us in all aspects.

>> I think that it is a good thing to try to learn something, like playing musical instruments because we can develop ourselves through participating in any learning activities and feel a sense of accomplishment when we finish it. Moreover, it allows us to enjoy time with family, friends, and others. It also makes us comfortable and satisfied. And to conclude, playing musical instruments is good for us in all aspects.

 Q6. Discuss the impact of Western music with the world music.
I think that it is good for us to experience other country’s cultures like western music as much as possible. because we can taste new and different feeling which we can never get from Korean culture and music. It also may stimulate Korean music to be developed in another new way. As we experience various cultures, we can create another interesting culture in music. That is the reason why I like other counter music including Western music. It is good for us as well as all over the world.

>> I think that it is good for us to experience other country’s cultures like listening to Western music as much as possible because we can learn and experience something new and different from what we have in our own country. It may also stimulate Korean music to be developed in a different way. As we experience various cultures, we can create another interesting culture in music. That is the reason why I like music from other countries, like Western music. It is good for us and to other people all over the world.


Q1.
I like talking with others to exchange our experience and idea, and I like reading books and listening to music.

>> I like talking with others to exchange our experiences and ideas, and I also like reading books and listening to music. 


Q2.
I have been reading books since childhood and I have been listening to music since middle school, but I can listen to music with Hi-Fi audio system recently, because of working in my company.

***I need to clarify something about your answer first during our class...


I have been reading books since childhood and I have been listening to music since middle school using a portable music player. I listen to music on my smartphone. A  few years ago, I was fortunate to have some spare money to buy a Hi-Fi audio system that plays high quality version of music. 


Q3.
In fact, I can\'t read my favorite books recently except for textbook for studying. I am studying now for getting the certificate of level 1 in Korean history exam. and I have been reading English history books to improve my English skills and studying textbook for Power English lesson for 10 months. It also affects me listening to music less.


***I need to clarify something about your answer first during our class before giving you any correction.


Q4
Yes, I do. I think that there are many kinds of a hobby because there is no one who has the same personality in the world. So I can understand various hobbies, and I want to experience all of them but not keeping a pet. because I like animals but not wanting them to live with at home. I have an allergy to animal fur and my wife scare from animals.

>> Yes, I do. I think that there are many kinds of hobbies because each person has his or her own personality which makes them interested in different things also.  So I can understand various hobbies, and I want to experience all of them but I don\'t like keeping a pet. I like animals but I don\'t really want  them to live in my home. I have an allergy to animal fur and my wife is scared of animals.  

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