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Q5. Do you think it will cost too much to do them?
No, I don’t, I think that hobby is meant to be just like leisure time and it should not affect works anything. I try to spend free time on my hobby appropriately, I want to enjoy my hobby as rest and recharging my batteries.
>> No, I don\'t. (OR: No, I don\'t think so.) I think that hobby is meant to be done during our leisure time and it should not affect our work or other compulsory activities, like household chores, education,, etc.. I try to spend my free time on my hobby appropriately. I want to enjoy my hobby to recharge or restore my strength and energy.
Q6. Do you like hobbies requiring teamwork?
No, I don’t, because I recently have many personal affairs to do every day, I have less time to share with my hobby. So I don’t want to make any difficult situation that my hobby affects my schedule negatively. It is hard for me to be gathered with others for now.
>>No, I don’t (like hobbies requiring teamwork.) because recently, I had many personal affairs to do every day which means that I had less time to do my hobby with someone else. So, I don’t want to make (OR: create ) any difficult situation wherein my hobby affects my schedule negatively. It is hard for me to gather with others for now.
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Q1. Tell me about your job.
I am working as an engineer for inspecting and maintaining civil structures in an urban transportation company in Incheon, Korea. and I am proud to say that though my work needs high concentration and effort, I am still doing well my responsibility for urban transportation safety without any critical accidents.
>> I am working as an engineer for inspecting and maintaining civil structures in an urban transportation company in Incheon, Korea. And I am proud to say that though my work needs high concentration and effort, I am still doing my responsibilities well for urban transportation safety without any critical accidents.
>>> OR: I work as an engineer for the inspection and maintenance of civil structures in an urban transportation company in Incheon, Korea, and I am proud to say that although my work needs high concentration and effort, I am still doing my responsibilities well. So far, there have been no critical incidents under my watch.
Q2. How is it related to your major in the university? If it is not related, how did you choose your current job?
My job is closely related to my major. I studied civil engineering at university and graduated from university in 1998. At that time Korea was in financially difficult, so we had to borrow money from IMF(International Monetary Fund) who could lend money to the financially difficult country. It was really hard time to all Koreans. I tried to find a stable company and joined my current company with bringing out my university major.
>> My job is closely related to my major. I studied civil engineering in the university and I graduated in 1998. At that time, Korea was in financial difficulties, so we had to borrow money from IMF(International Monetary Fund) who could lend money to countries who are suffering from financially difficulties. It was really a hard time to all Koreans. I tried to find a stable company and fortunately I was able to join my current company and work on something related to my university major.
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