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Q5
The shopping malls have many sorts of merchandise so that we can buy most of the items that we want at a time without moving around. That is the reason why the big shopping malls are getting popular more recently in a retail market field. The smaller shop has weakness in this regard but it has also an advantage for gaining the customer, it is easy to access due to the close distance around a residential area. so there is some small shop called a convenient store in Korea opening around a big apartment complex.
>> Shopping malls have many sorts of merchandise so that we can buy most of the items that we want at a time without moving around. (OR: Shopping malls sell various merchandise which makes it convenient for customers to buy different items in one place.) That is the reason why the big shopping malls are getting more popular recently in the retail market field. Smaller shops has weaknesses in this regard but they also have an advantage in gaining customers if they are located within residential areas because it would make them more accessible to people living in the area. In Korea, there are several small shops which are also called convenient stores opening around a big apartment complex.
Q6
I think that big shopping centers will be a general trend in a consumption market because it can give customers not only saving time and money but convenience on shopping. When I was childhood, the small shop was very common because it needed less capital than at now so everyone who wants to make a living in it could easily join.
>> I think that big shopping centers will be a general trend in the consumption market not only because it allows customers to save time and money but also because of the convenience of shopping various products in one place. When I was a child, small shops were very common because it needed less capital than at present, so everyone who wants to make a living through it could easily join.
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