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Q1
No, I don’t have enough free time, because I have a lot of things to do every day, for example taking a power English program every night, going to another city to take a class of graduate school every Saturday all day long, and preparing answers and materials related to above studies.
>> No, I don’t have enough free time because I have a lot of things to do every day, for example taking a power English program every night, going to another city to take my graduate school class every Saturday all day long, and preparing answers and materials related to the above studies.
Q2
I spend my free time with my family commonly on Sunday, because I am very busy on weekdays and Saturday for doing a job and taking classes as I mentioned above. and then my family and I sometimes go to restaurants for pleasure time with a delicious meal, I clean my home and help my wife doing chores, I listen to music with my wife which she is favorite, last but not least I sometimes lay myself on the bed doing nothing for relaxing.
>> I commonly (OR: usually) spend my free time with my family on Sundays because I am very busy on weekdays and Saturday due to my job and classes as I mentioned above. Sometimes, my family and I go to restaurants for the pleasure of having some delicious meal. I also clean my home (OR: house) and help my wife with other house chores. Other times, I also listen to music with my wife which is her favorite pastime and last but not least, I sometimes lay myself on the bed doing nothing but relaxing.
Q3
I usually spend my free time with my family on Sunday, because there is no time on weekdays. we go to a restaurant to refresh ourself and shopping mall to buy some groceries for a meal.
>> I usually spend my free time with my family on Sundays because there is no time on weekdays. We go to a restaurant to refresh and go to shopping malls to buy some groceries for our meals.
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