Answer for questions

2018-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

학생이 쓴 원문

Page 8 Q5 Most of the people are inclined to want other’s interest and attention, but in reality, it is not easy for them to get an unconditional interest and attention especially today due to such a busy and complex social life. So I think that people seek comfort from keeping pets in their homes alternatively. Q6 I think that most of the people give respect to animals these days, as people who raise pets in their home is growing they regard animals as friends that give consolation. As a result, many people pay attention to the right of the animal recently Page 9 Q1 I went to Kangwon province last holiday, it is located in the eastern part of Korea and faces the sea called East Sea. It is popular with many Koreans who need to rest from the stress of urban life because it is mountainous and uncontaminated nature. Q2 I like to spend holidays with my family because I have so many personal things on weekdays that I don’t have time to enjoy with my family. But sometimes I need a time for myself when it is really hard.

강사 첨삭

Q5
Most of the people are inclined to want other’s interest and attention, but in reality, it is not easy for them to get an unconditional interest and attention especially today due to such a busy and complex social life. So I think that people seek comfort from keeping pets in their homes alternatively.
>> Most people are inclined to want other\'s interest and attention. However, in reality, it is not easy for them to get an unconditional interest and attention especially nowadays due to people\'s busy and complex social lives so, I think that people seek comfort from their pets at home as an alternative.

Q6
I think that most of the people give respect to animals these days, as people who raise pets in their home is growing they regard animals as friends that give consolation. As a result, many people pay attention to the right of the animal recently
>> I think most people give (OR: show) respect to animals these days, as the number of people who raise pets in their home is growing. They regard animals as friends who give them consolation. As a result, many people have been paying attention to the rights of animals (OR: to animal rights) recently.

Page 9

Q1
I went to Kangwon province last holiday, it is located in the eastern part of Korea and faces the sea called East Sea. It is popular with many Koreans who need to rest from the stress of urban life because it is mountainous and uncontaminated nature.
>> I went to Kangwon province last holiday. It is located in the eastern part of Korea and faces the sea called \"East Sea\". It is popular with many Koreans who needs to rest from the stress of urban life because it is mountainous and uncontaminated.

Q2
I like to spend holidays with my family because I have so many personal things on weekdays that I don’t have time to enjoy with my family. But sometimes I need a time for myself when it is really hard.
>> I like to spend holidays with my family because I have so many personal things to do on weekdays that I don’t have time to enjoy with my family anymore. However, I sometimes need time for myself when I\'m having a hard time.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기