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2018-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Don

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Book3 / Part1 Module3 University (Page 17) 1. What is the name of your university? I graduate from Ulsan university in 1998. and I studied civil engineering there. 2. What are you studying now? I’m studying international contracts in Chungbuk graduate school. I am going to get a master's degree next year. and I’m also studying English hard to improve my language competency for overseas business. 3. What is your area of specialization? As you know, I have been working on inspection and maintenance of railway and civil structures. They are mainly a tunnel and a bridge for the metro system. I also have experienced on making new profit business related to the metro system and now I concentrate all my efforts on developing national R&D business. Through this, we can introduce new technology related to the metro system to our system so that we can improve work efficiency more.

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HAPPY MONDAY KI [이름]!

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1. What is the name of your university?
I graduate from Ulsan university in 1998. and I studied civil engineering there.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> I studied and graduated civil engineering in Ulsan University in 1998.

2. What are you studying now?
I’m studying international contracts in Chungbuk graduate school. I am going to get a master\'s degree next year.
and I’m also studying English hard to improve my language competency for overseas business.
>> CORRECT
OR:
>> These days, I am studying International Contracts in Chungbik graduate school and I am also planning to get a master\'s degree next year. I am also studying very hard nowadays because I need to improve my language competency for my overseas business in the future.

3. What is your area of specialization?
As you know, I have been working on inspection and maintenance of railway and civil structures. They are mainly a tunnel and a bridge for the metro system. I also have experienced on making new profit business related to the metro system and now I concentrate all my efforts on developing national R&D business. Through this, we can introduce new technology related to the metro system to our system so that we can improve work efficiency more.
>> CORRECT

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