Answer for questions
학생이 쓴 원문
Book3 / Part1 Module3 Government (Page 21)
1. What kind of government do you have?
We have a democratic government.
2. How are government officials chosen in your country?
We have a presidential system and one national assembly that has 299 representatives. We elect the Korea president every 5 years and representatives every 4 years. And to conclude, we always choose our government by referendum.
Book3 / Part1 Module3 Government (Page 22)
3. How interested are you in politics?
I am very interested in the politics of Korea. Because politics is one of the major measures to improve our real life better. I have shown my political opinion in every election by voting the suitable person who runs for president or representative. But I rarely talk to other with politics, because it is always making conflict of opinion and lead us into the emotional dispute in most of them and finally put some distance between my friend and me.
강사 첨삭
1. What kind of government do you have?
2. How are government officials chosen in your country?
We have a presidential system and one national assembly that has 299 representatives. We elect the Korea president every 5 years and representatives every 4 years. And to conclude, we always choose our government by referendum.
Book3 / Part1 Module3 Government (Page 22)
3. How interested are you in politics?
I am very interested in the politics of Korea. Because politics is one of the major measures to improve our real life better. I have shown my political opinion in every election by voting the suitable person who runs for president or representative. But I rarely talk to other with politics, because it is always making conflict of opinion and lead us into the emotional dispute in most of them and finally put some distance between my friend and me.
We have a democratic government.
>> We have a democratic kind of goverment.
OR:
>> We have a democratic type of government.
2. How are government officials chosen in your country?
We have a presidential system and one national assembly that has 299 representatives. We elect the Korea president every 5 years and representatives every 4 years. And to conclude, we always choose our government by referendum.
>> We have a presidential system and one national assembly that has 299 representatives. We elect the Korean President every 5 years and representatives every 4 years. And to conclude, we always choose our government by referendum.
Book3 / Part1 Module3 Government (Page 22)
3. How interested are you in politics?
I am very interested in the politics of Korea. Because politics is one of the major measures to improve our real life better. I have shown my political opinion in every election by voting the suitable person who runs for president or representative. But I rarely talk to other with politics, because it is always making conflict of opinion and lead us into the emotional dispute in most of them and finally put some distance between my friend and me.
>> I am very interested in politics in Korea because it is one of the major measures to improve life of the citizens. I have shown my political opinion in every election by voting the suitable candidate who runs for a President or a representative but I rarely talk politics to others because it causes conflicts of different opinion and lead us into the emotional dispute and finally put some distance between my friends and I.
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