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03/19/2019
1. shake up (1) to upset or frighten someone by shocking or surprising them;
I don’t like him because he frequently shakes me up by showing repulsive pictures like car accidents.
>> or: Showing me repulsive pictures like ones of car accidents make me dislike him for shaking me up frequently.
2. Shake up (2) to make changes in the way that a company is organized so that it\'s more effective or successful.
The new board of director plans to shake up our company to seek a change of direction for the new profit creation.
>> or: To seek a change of direction for the new profit creation, the new board of directors plans to shake up our company.
3. inflicted upon
I think that my department head gives him tasks on purpose that inflicted a lot of stress upon him to be made obedient.
>> It seems to me that my department head gives him tasks on purpose to make him obedient, which inflicted a lot of stress upon him.
4. paranoid
He seems to be paranoid about gathering military equipment and information
>> Gathering military equipment and information seems to have made him paranoid.
5. early on
Parents had better cure their children of a bad habit early on.
>> Parents had better break their children\'s bad habit early on.
03/20/2019
→ John Wooden said: \"Sports do not build character. They reveal it.\" Do you agree?
I don’t agree with him because I think that one’s character has been made of a lot of factor like personal environment, health, parents, friends, and so on. for such a reason, sports seems to be seen a major factor to reveal one’s character but, in fact, it is just one of the factors that are able to consist of one’s character.
>> I disagree with him because I think that a lot of factors affect the formation and development of a person\'s character such as personal environment, health, parents, friends, and so on. Based on such components, sports seem to be seen as a major factor in revealing one\'s character, but in fact, it is just one of its elements.
03/21/2019
→ How are the eating habits now in your country different from eating habits in the past?
We had been consuming a lot of rice in the past time in Korea because there were fewer varieties of food like side dishes so we had no choice but eating rice more, furthermore, they had to do physical labor for rice farming. but nowadays we have plenty of food so we are able to eat whatever we want and whenever. besides, we have food for pleasure, not for living.
>> Rice consumption was higher in the past because there were fewer varieties of food like side dishes so we had no choice but to eat rice more. Furthermore, they had to do physical labor for rice farming, but nowadays, we have plenty of food that\'s why we can eat whatever and whenever we want. Besides, we have food in order to experience pleasure, not so we can live.
In my view, this is the differences between eating habits in the past and now.
>> In my view, these are the major and apparent differences between the eating habits in the past and in the present.
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