Answer for questions(modification for yesterday lesson)
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I think that reading and the computer age have competitive and complementary relationship each other.
>> I think that reading and the computer age has a competitive and complementary relationship with each other.
>> OR: I think that the computer age plays a signifant role in making books and other reading materials accessible to people, thereby giving them unlimited opportunities to enhance their knowledge by reading them.
Reading books is the only way to get knowledge and information in days of yore. but they were too expensive to use for everyone.
>> Reading books is the only way to gain knowledge and information back in the old days, but they were too expensive for everyone to use.
Only a few people like a nobleman and rich person could have books and enjoyed the pleasure of reading and the benefit of using them exclusively.
>> Only few people like noblemen and rich people could have books and enjoy the pleasure and benefits of reading and using them exclusively.
But nowadays books are cheap enough to be popularized for everyone, so most of the people love reading books. and we have another strong privilege that is quick and convenient to find information. It is computer and internet.
>>But nowadays, books are cheap (affordable) enough to be popularized for everyone, so most people love reading books. We also have another convenient option to find information. It is the computer and the internet.
though it is convenient and rapid for us to find information or answer for a question. but there is the problem about the reliability of information and difficulty of finding exactly what I want.
>> Though it is convenient and rapid for us to find information using the internet, there are some problems, like the reliability of information and difficulty of finding exactly what we\'re looking for.
But books are organized well to understand easily and reliable for contents due to being made by professional, so that is why books have been used as textbook widely in the world since past.
>> But books are organized well to be understood easily and they also contain reliable information because they were written by professionals. That is why books have been widely used as textbook in schools and other learning institutions worldwide ever since people started attending schools.
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