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My dream is to healthy and rich.
Because healthy is must be rich and I have not become rich yet, but happy will come a lot of money.
I want to many sentence, but i make many sentence difficult. Please understand me.
강사 첨삭
Hi, James! We have the same dream. I also want a lot of money. Money can definitely make me happy and healthy.
You did well in tonight\'s homework. Please keep trying. Don\'t worry about mistakes. I\'ll help you make it better :-)
--Teacher Anji
My dream is to healthy and rich.
>> My dream is to be healthy and rich.
Because healthy is must be rich and I have not become rich yet, but happy will come a lot of money.
>> Because good health is a must to be rich. I have not become rich yet, but happiness comes when you have a lot of money.
I want to many sentence, but i make many sentence difficult. Please understand me.
>> I want to make many sentences but it\'s difficult. Please understand me.
>> My dream is to be healthy and rich.
Because healthy is must be rich and I have not become rich yet, but happy will come a lot of money.
>> Because good health is a must to be rich. I have not become rich yet, but happiness comes when you have a lot of money.
I want to many sentence, but i make many sentence difficult. Please understand me.
>> I want to make many sentences but it\'s difficult. Please understand me.
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