Answer : How is your younger self different from the person you are today?
학생이 쓴 원문
Your question is good. these days, i\'m just some depressed.
Because i\'m fat after wedding. Before i marriaged, my body is ballanced and lean constitution.
But after i marriaged and didn\'t excercise, By so fast pace my body become fat.
My chin fat become also sagged (English word of person\'s body is very difficult)
Exactly, i must to do either excercising or eatting ballanced.
ft. The reason that i did our class without video cam is of course i don\'t have camera in my computer.
But second reason is you see only my fat appearance and don\'t know my younger appearance.
Then you\'ll think this is who I am. i\'m never agree.
강사 첨삭
I appreciate this very detailed answer, Steven. I admire your perseverance to compose something like this in English despite the difficulties. I\'m proud of you! What matters to me is that you\'re a very kind student, who is doing his best to become a good family man by strengthening his faith in the Lord. Thank you for your answer, Steven!
~T.Harmony <3
>> CORRECT!
these days, i\'m just some depressed.
>> I\'ve been feeling a bit depressed these days.
Because i\'m fat after wedding.
Because i\'m fat after wedding.
>> Because I became fat after my wedding.
OR>> Because I gained weight after my wedding.
Before i marriaged, my body is ballanced and lean constitution.
>> Before I got married, my body was lean and had a balanced condition.
But after i marriaged and didn\'t excercise, By so fast pace my body become fat.
But after i marriaged and didn\'t excercise, By so fast pace my body become fat.
>> But after my marriage, I didn\'t exercise and everything went by so fast that my body soon became fat.
My chin fat become also sagged (English word of person\'s body is very difficult)
My chin fat become also sagged (English word of person\'s body is very difficult)
>> The fat under my chin started to sag.
OR>> I developed a double chin. (The expression \"double chin\" is when the fat under the chin sags and it ends up looking like there are two chins. I understand that it\'s hard, so I appreciate your effort, Steven! You\'re doing great. ^^)
Exactly, i must to do either excercising or eatting ballanced.
>> I must exercise or eat a balanced diet.
ft. The reason that i did our class without video cam is of course i don\'t have camera in my computer.
Exactly, i must to do either excercising or eatting ballanced.
>> I must exercise or eat a balanced diet.
ft. The reason that i did our class without video cam is of course i don\'t have camera in my computer.
>> The reason behind my camera always being turned off during our classes is because I don\'t have a camera in my computer.
But second reason is you see only my fat appearance and don\'t know my younger appearance.
But second reason is you see only my fat appearance and don\'t know my younger appearance.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> ...you\'re not aware of my younger appearance.
Then you\'ll think this is who I am.
Then you\'ll think this is who I am.
>> CORRECT!
i\'m never agree.
>> I\'ll never agree with that.
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