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2011-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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It helps me to have a good team work with my co-workers. Somebody who are depress by some problem want me to relax (What do you mean by this? Do you mean that they help you relax when you are depressed?) -> Felt depressed person want me to reduce their bad feeling by talk with it can change that people to relax click the Korea traditional health food If you want http://topchefkorea.com/2011/03/14/samgyetang/ [이름] [이름], how come you did not study the English language in England like your brother? -> I don't like England style English and I'm so late to participate in English study abroad

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Hi there. Thanks for dropping by. See you on Monday! It helps me to have a good team work with my co-workers. >>Correct!Somebody who are depress by some problem want me to relax >>A depressed person wants me to reduce their bad feelings by talking about it. This can help a person relax. (What do you mean by this? Do you mean that they help you relax when you are depressed?) >>correct-> Felt depressed person want me to reduce their bad feeling by talk with it can change that people to relax >>A depressed person wants me to reduce their bad feelings by talking about it. This can help a person relax.click the Korea traditional health food If you wanthttp://topchefkorea.com/2011/03/14/samgyetang/ >>Click the link for Korean traditional healthy foods if you want.[이름] [이름], how come you did not study the English language in England like your brother? >>correct-> I don't like England style English and I'm so late to participate in English study abroad >>I don't like England's English style and I'm too late to participate in the English study abroad.  

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