Answer the following questions and send the draft

2020-11-23 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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1. What do you usually do when you arrive in a place? At first, I usually try to find a tourist office to get a map of the place where I arrive. If I have a map, I feel more comfortable. Because, on the map, I can find accommodation, the bus or train station, and tourist attractive places. Using that information, I am able to set a traveling route which is possible to look around all places I want to see. 2. What are the benefits of travelling? Traveling brings me a source of happiness, a lot of knowledge and excitement. First of all, planning where to go and what to do on my vacation makes me feel alive and more in control over my free time, one source of my happiness. Secondly, I can have a chance to visit many types of museums therein, such as modern or classic art, or historic, or science. These are education places to me. Finally, there will be many regional activities like tracking a valley, or sighting wild lives at an animal park. It does sound so much fun to me.

강사 첨삭

Happy new week [이름]!

You got perfect grammar here on the two questions. Congratulations!

See you later in class for the discussion.

-T. Donna =)

1. What do you usually do when you arrive in a place?

At first, I usually try to find a tourist office to get a map of the place where I arrive. If I have a map, I feel more comfortable. Because, on the map, I can find accommodation, the bus or train station, and tourist attractive places. Using that information, I am able to set a traveling route which is possible to look around all places I want to see.
>> Correct!

2. What are the benefits of travelling?
Traveling brings me a source of happiness, a lot of knowledge and excitement. First of all, planning where to go and what to do on my vacation makes me feel alive and more in control over my free time, one source of my happiness. Secondly, I can have a chance to visit many types of museums therein, such as modern or classic art, or historic, or science. These are education places to me. Finally, there will be many regional activities like tracking a valley, or sighting wild lives at an animal park. It does sound so much fun to me.
>> Correct!

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