Answer the following questions in full sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
1. What is the job you are applying for?
- I apply for promoting Korean cultural heritage and planning events.
Also, finding traditional skills to support craftmen and inform people.
2. What are your key strengths and skills that make you a good fit for this job?
- I majored in computer engineering, so I can handle computers well.
Because of that, I can promote well in SNS targeting MZ generation.
3. How does your background and skill set align with the job requirements?
I think I can give a lot of informative information to people bacause I enjoy interacting with people and teaching students about Korean history and cultural.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! I am so amazed by all the things you can do. You are very talented, and I admire that you love what you do. I think you\'ll be very successful in this chosen field of yours. Let\'s talk more, and I\'ll see you in our class!
- Teacher Jade
- Teacher Jade
1. What is the job you are applying for?
- I apply for promoting Korean cultural heritage and planning events.
- I apply for promoting Korean cultural heritage and planning events.
>> I\'m applying to promote Korean culture heritage and plan events.
Also, finding traditional skills to support craftmen and inform people.
>> Also, finding traditional skills to support craftsmen and educate people.
2. What are your key strengths and skills that make you a good fit for this job?
- I majored in computer engineering, so I can handle computers well.
Also, finding traditional skills to support craftmen and inform people.
>> Also, finding traditional skills to support craftsmen and educate people.
2. What are your key strengths and skills that make you a good fit for this job?
- I majored in computer engineering, so I can handle computers well.
>> Correct
Because of that, I can promote well in SNS targeting MZ generation.
>> Because of that, I can promote well on SNS, targeting the MZ generation.
3. How does your background and skill set align with the job requirements?
I think I can give a lot of informative information to people bacause I enjoy interacting with people and teaching students about Korean history and cultural.
>> I think I can give a lot of informative information to people because I enjoy interacting with people and teaching students about Korean history and culture.
Because of that, I can promote well in SNS targeting MZ generation.
>> Because of that, I can promote well on SNS, targeting the MZ generation.
3. How does your background and skill set align with the job requirements?
I think I can give a lot of informative information to people bacause I enjoy interacting with people and teaching students about Korean history and cultural.
>> I think I can give a lot of informative information to people because I enjoy interacting with people and teaching students about Korean history and culture.
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