Answer the homework

2012-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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hellow, sir jane! i spend you my answer the homework. Subject: Who are you closer with: younger sister or older sister? Why? Answer is, I love them all of cause. and i don't know closer of me! I think, usually when I need something, i called my older sister before the younger sister. But, truth be told, I more love my younger sister than older sister. Because i have a fight her a old days, of cause when we was children. And when i writing this, i thought and went my oldest time. thank you so much!

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Hi there, Sir Steve! Thank you so much for your composition today. I appreciate your effort in writing one for me. Take care and have a nice day! T. JanE ^^ hellow, sir jane! >> Hello, Ms. [Name]!i spend you my answer the homework.>> This is my answer to the homework.Subject: Who are you closer with: younger sister or older sister? Why?>> Correct.Answer is,>> Here is my answer.I love them all of cause. and i don\'t know closer of me!>> I love them both, but I don\'t know who I am closer with.I think, usually when I need something, i called my older sister before the younger sister.>> I think that when I need something, I usually call my older sister first before my younger sister.But, truth be told, I more love my younger sister than older sister.>> Correct.Because i have a fight her a old days, of cause when we was children.>> I fought with her when we were young.And when i writing this, i thought and went my oldest time.>> While writing this, I was thinking about my childhood days.thank you so much! >> Correct.  

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