Answer the question in not more than five sentences. Honesty or Other’s Feelings?

2017-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

Although other people may feel unpleasant when something happened, Honesty is one of important factors in social life. Sometimes People used to say that white lie is also quite essential factor when they work with those who have lived in different life style. However, every kinds of lies are revealed as any forms someday. These are main reasons why I think honesty is much more important than other’s feelings of that time. If you have truly mind and honesty opinions, they will understand gradually as time goes by.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

Being honest means choosing not to lie, steal, cheat, or deceive in any way.

When we are honest, we build strength of character that will allow us to be great.

To me, it is better to be honest in all your opinions.

It is even better to tell the truth even if it hurts.

It is sometimes better to be hurt knowing the truth than a lie.

~Teacher Chloe

Although other people may feel unpleasant when something happened, Honesty is one of important factors in social life.

>>Although other people may feel unpleasant to someone who is being honest, honesty is one of the important factors in life.
Sometimes People used to say that white lie is also quite essential factor when they work with those who have lived in different life style.
>>Sometimes people tell white lies depending on the situations they are into.
However, every kinds of lies are revealed as any forms someday. 
>>However, it may bring conflict or misunderstanding.
These are main reasons why I think honesty is much more important than other’s feelings of that time.
>>I think that honesty is more important than others\' feelings.
If you have truly mind and honesty opinions, they will understand gradually as time goes by.

>>It is better to have honest opinions because they are more appreciated than white lies.    

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