Answer the questions in 2-3 sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
1. What made you interested in applying for the role? Was it profit, salary, or passion for work?
- Actually, the first interesting point was the salay.
However, I was interested in Korean history and cultural heritage. So, I was good to explain them to people.
Because of that, I gain a lot of pride and passion in the role.
Also, my favorite TV program \'Welcome to Korea, in frist time?\' that I think it would be good to inform Korean history and cultural heritage to foreigners who came to Korea in the frist time with accurate and informative information.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! I am glad you found a high-paying job that suits your interests as well. I also think you\'ll succeed in your chosen field. I am rooting for you! Goodluck!
- Teacher Jade^^
1. What made you interested in applying for the role? Was it profit, salary, or passion for work?
- Actually, the first interesting point was the salay.
>> Actually, the first interesting point was the salary.
However, I was interested in Korean history and cultural heritage.
>> Correct
So, I was good to explain them to people.
>> So I was good at explaining it to people.
Because of that, I gain a lot of pride and passion in the role.
>> Because of that, I gained a lot of pride and passion for the role.
Also, my favorite TV program \'Welcome to Korea, in frist time?\' that I think it would be good to inform Korean history and cultural heritage to foreigners who came to Korea in the frist time with accurate and informative information.
>> Also, I think that my favorite TV program, “Welcome to Korea for the First Time,” would be a great way to provide accurate and informative information to first-time foreign visitors to Korea about Korean history and cultural heritage.
- Teacher Jade^^
1. What made you interested in applying for the role? Was it profit, salary, or passion for work?
- Actually, the first interesting point was the salay.
>> Actually, the first interesting point was the salary.
However, I was interested in Korean history and cultural heritage.
>> Correct
So, I was good to explain them to people.
>> So I was good at explaining it to people.
Because of that, I gain a lot of pride and passion in the role.
>> Because of that, I gained a lot of pride and passion for the role.
Also, my favorite TV program \'Welcome to Korea, in frist time?\' that I think it would be good to inform Korean history and cultural heritage to foreigners who came to Korea in the frist time with accurate and informative information.
>> Also, I think that my favorite TV program, “Welcome to Korea for the First Time,” would be a great way to provide accurate and informative information to first-time foreign visitors to Korea about Korean history and cultural heritage.
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