Answer this question in 3-5 sentences. If you could change one thing about your past, what would it
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i would want to not get bullied, study hard and get good grades.. but i think these wont really be possible because if i had to go back in time and change things, i wouldnt actually realize it because my mental state and the body would return to the same young naive kid i was. or either time travel as my present self and meet my younger self. i do not want to particularily change something about myself. i believe all these incidents and experiences, either traumatic or amazing, happens in order to lead me to my fate and a better me.. but there is something i want to do, i would tell my dad to buy a stock (stocks that have increased in value in 2019)
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i would want to not get bullied, study hard and get good grades..
>>>I would want not to get bullied, study hard and get good grades.
but i think these wont really be possible because if i had to go back in time and change things, i wouldnt actually realize it because my mental state and the body would return to the same young naive kid i was.or either time travel as my present self and meet my younger self.
>>>But, I think these things won\'t really be possible if I had to go back in time and change things because I wouldn\'t actually realize that either my mental state and my body would return to the same young naive kid as I was or travel in time to meet my younger self.
i do not want to particularily change something about myself.
>>>I do not want to particularly change something about myself.
i believe all these incidents and experiences, either traumatic or amazing, happens in order to lead me to my fate and a better me..
>>>I believe that all these incidents and experiences, either traumatic or amazing, happened in order to lead me to my fate and a better me.
but there is something i want to do, i would tell my dad to buy a stock
>>>But, there is something I would want to do, I would tell my dad to buy a stock.
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