Answer : What do you think is the best game of all time?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course, The best game of my life is STARCRAFT.
This game is legend game in my country. and also this game made E-SPORTS.
This game is not only game. This game changed simply game to game industry of the world.
and lol is opened
강사 첨삭
It is my first time hearing about the game \"STARCRAFT\" :0 I wonder if a lot of players are still busy with that game today, considering how old it might be hehe. But thank you for the info! :)
~T.Harmony <3
>> CORRECT!
This game is legend game in my country.
This game is legend game in my country.
>> It is a legendary game in my country.
and also this game made E-SPORTS.
>> This game also became a part of E-SPORTS.
This game is not only game.
This game is not only game.
>> ...is not just a game.
This game changed simply game to game industry of the world.
>> It left a game-changing impact to the gaming industry in the entire world.
and lol is opened
and lol is opened
>> And it paved the way for LOL.
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