Answer : What do you think will the future look like 10 years from now?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think that. but I hope to alive happyful with my wife and child. and because i\'m christian, after decade i hope to still see jesus. Sometimes It is so hard to save my faith. because there is many thing to tempt me.
강사 첨삭
I think it\'s very thoughtful of you to remember your family and our Lord Jesus Christ even after a decade has passed. :) I agree with you on the last part. It is certainly not an easy task to walk the path of Jesus, especially as a Christian. I hope that you, your wife, and your child someday will all remain to be very happy. ^^
~T.Harmony <3
>> I haven\'t thought about that.
but I hope to alive happyful with my wife and child.
>> But I hope to be alive and joyful with my wife and child.
(The word \"happyful\" does not exist. ^^)
(The word \"happyful\" does not exist. ^^)
and because i\'m christian, after decade i hope to still see jesus.
>> Because I\'m a Christian, I hope to still see Jesus after a decade.
Sometimes It is so hard to save my faith.
>> CORRECT!
because there is many thing to tempt me.
>> Because I\'m surrounded by a lot of temptations.
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