Answer : What kind of people do you like to meet?
학생이 쓴 원문
Now, i\\\'m tired to meet someone. The reason is two things. One reason is that i\\\'m tired to meet someone after 30th years old.
Another reason is my personality. As you know that, my personality is introvert. I like to live my home. very larely alone. :D
But there is kind of people who i like. First, his personality must be introvert. If his personality is extravert, he exactly will drain my energy. T.T
And i hope that he like to play the game. Because i don\\\'t drink alchole, now. And...the most important thing remains. That is person must be a man.
p.s : I\'m so sorry. I\'m going to work lately, today..
강사 첨삭
An amusing composition from you, Steven! :) I understand that it can already be tiring to interact and build friendships with new people, especially for introverts. Hence, it\'s tempting to just stay at home, relax, and do the things that make us happy. Nice way to end it, by the way! Have a good weekend. ^^
~T.Harmony <3
>> As of the moment, I\'m tired of meeting new people.
The reason is two things.
>> There are two reasons.
One reason is that i\'m tired to meet someone after 30th years old.
>> The first reason is that I became tired of meeting someone new after I turned 30 years old.
Another reason is my personality.
Another reason is my personality.
>> CORRECT!
As you know that, my personality is introvert.
>> As you may know, I am an introvert.
I like to live my home.
>> I like to stay at home.
very larely alone. :D
>> I really want to be alone. :D
But there is kind of people who i like.
But there is kind of people who i like.
>> But there is a certain kind of person that I like.
First, his personality must be introvert.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> First, he must be an introvert like me.
If his personality is extravert, he exactly will drain my energy. T.T
>> If he is an extrovert (take note of the spelling ^^), he will drain all of my energy. T.T
And i hope that he like to play the game.
And i hope that he like to play the game.
>> And I hope that he likes to play games.
Because i don\'t drink alchole, now.
>> Because I don\'t drink alcohol anymore.
And...the most important thing remains.
>> CORRECT!
That is person must be a man.
>> That person must be a man.
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