Answer : What would you do if you became the richest person on Earth?
학생이 쓴 원문
good question. you already know that i\'m christian. so, there is my pray everyday. it is when i become the richest, i don\'t become too proud. I want my power to be used where God\'s gaze stays. the say is translated T.T. I really won\'t to say to you this say.
강사 첨삭
Great answer, Steven! :) It\'s nice to know that you keep your feet on the ground (an idiom which means to be humble) regardless of all the wealth that might come your way. If God has blessed us with plentiful resources, we must use them to glorify our God Almighty. Share the blessings. ^^
~T.Harmony <3
>> CORRECT!
>> (Just remember to capitalize the first letter of your sentences. ^^ From \"good question\" to \"Good question\")
you already know that i\'m christian.
>> You already know that I\'m a Christian.
so, there is my pray everyday.
>> That is my prayer everyday.
it is when i become the richest, i don\'t become too proud.
>> Which is to not be too proud when I become the richest man.
I want my power to be used where God\'s gaze stays.
>> I want my power to be used based on God\'s gaze upon me.
the say is translated T.T.
>> The word \"stay\" was translated.
I really won\'t to say to you this say.
>> I really want to tell you this word which is similar to \"stay\".
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