“Anyone who stops learning is old, whether at twenty or eighty. Anyone who keeps learning stays youn
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree with this. Since he is a success, he knows why the education is important. I also agree with what he said, \"the age doesn\'t matter with the desire to learn.\" Some other people apply a standard that learning is just for teenagers. But if we just have a desire to learn something, just learn it! Not only learning, but also so many things are being standardrizing by the society or their perception. But just like Henry Ford said, learn everyday. Not for the society. Don\'t care about other\'s perception. It is you that progress by learning something. And if you feel you are progressed, that\'s it!
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름]!
~Teacher James
>>> CORRECT
>>OR: I agree with this statement.
Since he is a success, he knows why the education is important.
>>> Since he is successful, he knows why education is important.
I also agree with what he said, \"the age doesn\'t matter with the desire to learn.\"
>>> CORRECT
Some other people apply a standard that learning is just for teenagers.
>>> CORRECT
But if we just have a desire to learn something, just learn it! Not only learning, but also so many things are being standardrizing by the society or their perception.
>>> But if we just have a desire to learn something, just learn it! Not only learning but also so many things are being standardized by society or their perception.
But just like Henry Ford said, learn everyday. Not for the society.
>>> But just like Henry Ford said, learn every day. Not for society.
Don\'t care about other\'s perception. It is you that progress by learning something.
>>> Don\'t care about other\'s perceptions. It is you that progress by learning something.
And if you feel you are progressed, that\'s it!
>>> CORRECT
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